Sunday, January 13, 2013
Journal L
I enjoyed this writing class. First, I will write about “Paragraph”. Paragraph was difficult for me to limit number of words. I always had many things I wanted to write in the paragraphs. I think most difficult theme of paragraph was “Cloning”. Especially, I had more ideas than other paragraphs. However, I have to limit the number of words. It was difficult to get my ideas in shape. I think writing paragraphs made my writing skill in English strong.
Also, it was difficult to submit to “gakunaishisyobako”. When I submit my paragraph, many students sit down in front of computer. Therefore, I couldn’t submit paragraphs when I wanted to submit them.
Second, I will write about “Journal”. When I was given first journal, I thought that was troublesome. However, when I started to write, I felt it interesting. Paragraphs are limited number of words, but journals are not limited it, so I enjoyed writing journal. Sometimes, themes of journals were difficult. For example, themes which are “negative people” and “something I know how to do that not everyone else knows how to do” were difficult. When I wrote about negative people, I thought I wrote bad things about the negative people. Especially, “something I know how to do” was most difficult theme in journals, so I couldn’t wrote the journal. I didn’t know the way only I know. The themes which were easy to write were “Internet” and “memorable things”. I enjoyed writing journals about them.
I thought whether we need the writing textbook or not. We didn’t use the textbook many times in this writing class. I think you should write important things to the white board, and we should write them to our notebook. Although many homework were given in this class, I enjoyed this class, and I could learn many things about rules of grammar I didn’t know.
Journal K
Once upon a time, there was a giant. He had lived alone in a cave. However, the cave was very hot in summer, very cold in winter. It was the coldest winter since records began. The giant preserved a lot of foods, but he didn't have many clothes because there were not clothes which suit to him.
In a village which is near the cave, there were not a lot of food, but there were many clothes. A lot of cotton were produced in the village, so villagers concentrated at producing cotton. The villagers had bought foods from other villages every winter by now. However, they couldn't import foods because of the heavy snow. Therefore, they were suffered from hunger. They didn't ask the giant for help because they were afraid of the giant with his looks.
On the other hand, the giant thought that he was hated by them who were afraid him. He had lived alone, so he was sad.
One day, a mother and a child came to the giant to ask for help. They said to him, "Could you give us some foods? We can't endure hunger!!" He was surprised and happy because villagers asked him for help. He smiled, and he gave a lot of foods to not only a mother and a child, but also other villagers. Because of his help, many villagers could overcome the hunger.
After few weeks, all the villagers started to make very big clothes by cooperating. Finally, they made very big clothes which were suit to the giant. Villagers brought the big clothes to the giant. He was very happy to get his clothes. He wore the clothes. The clothes were very suit to him. After that, villagers and the giant have helped each other when they were in trouble.
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